Tuesday 4 September 2012
The fool
He thinks this is bad... the fool.
The transfiguring light of a sunset
Capitalizes the events of the day passed
Shapes that form the surrounding world begin to take on new color
Images of the archetypal world rise
As their bodies begin to retreat
The young dreamers awake
Preternatural thoughts are visualized
A view of green and purple waves begin to break on the shore
Fallen rays discharged from the withdrawing sun
Vanquish their loneliness
And enlightened their growing connection
C.S.Atherton
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thats because it is bad :P
ReplyDeleteThe only reason it is bad in my view is because you spelt COLOUR wrong. Other than that its good :)
ReplyDeleteyou could have corrected it for me :P and ITS ALL BAD :D
ReplyDeleteWhy on earth should I correct YOUR mistakes? You should know better!!
Deletefine dont then! :P
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